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Postprzez Mileydi » 25 sty 2009, o 20:23

Jestem tu nowa i mam nadzieje ze bedzie ktos wstanie poprawic moje story...jesli wogle to bedzie mozna nazwac story...

It was beautiful morning, my friend Tomy invited me for a real New Year's Eve party. I was excited, at least I go somewhere. When I come home I say to my moher that I want go to my friend ,this special evening
My mother start shouting : ,, You can't go, you have only 12 year's old, you are too young ! And waht happend with grandmother.? You have to stay with her ! You know that I can't because I have duty this night. I was so angry.
The evening of the year 2000 was really snowy and I must stay at home. Oh what a shame- I though. Before my mum go to work, she bought me a crips, cake and even she made me my favourite dishes.
It was 8 o'clock and my mum go to work. Unfortunately as I promise her, I stayed at home. I go watched Tv with grandma. Sudenlly she say that she felt bad. ,, What's wrong ''? I ask. My chest pain me so much,she said. I Quickly take phone and call the ambulance. They arrived quickly and take my poor grandma. I take a taxi and go to hospital. One of the doctor says that if i wouldn't call she would die.

to pisałam z głowy bez zadnego sciagania i zerkania w słownik ..mam nadzieje ze nie jest to stek bzdur ...prosze nich mi ktos to spradzi i oceni......musze sie nauczyc pisania opowiadan a jak ktos mi nie wytknie błedow (których zapewne jest tu pełno) to nigdy nei bede swiadoma co robie zle..

Zgóry dzieki :)
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hej milo cie poznac:)

Postprzez Julia » 26 sty 2009, o 12:20

postaram sie poprawic bledy:

It was a beautiful morning, my friend Tomy invited me for a real New Year's Eve party. I was excited, at least I went somewhere. When I came home I said to my moher that I wanted go to my friend ,that special evening
My mother started shouting : ,, You can't go, you are only 12 year's old, you are too young ! And what will happen with a grandmother.? You have to stay with her ! You know that I can't because I have duties this night' I was so angry.
The evening of the year 2000 was really snowy and I had to stay at home. Oh what a shame- I though. Before my mum had gone to work, she bought me crisps, cake and even she prepared my favourite dishes.
It was 8 o'clock and my mum gwent to work. Unfortunately as I promise her, I stayed at home. I went to watch Tv with my grandma. Sudenly she said that she felt bad. ,, What's wrong ''? I asked. My chest pains are so strong,she said. I Quickly took a phone and called the ambulance. They arrived quickly and took my poor grandma. I took a taxi and went to a hospital too. One of the doctor said that if I hadn't called she would have died.

Musisz stosować czasy przeszłe oraz uważaj na przedimki. Myślę, że większość poprawiłam.

Pozdrawiam Cię
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hej.

Postprzez Mileydi » 26 sty 2009, o 20:21

łał....Dziękuje Ci bardzo...w sumie nie sadziłam żeby komukolwiek chciało się czytać to co tam napisałam a tym bardziej poprawiać. Widze ze opłaca się tu zamieszczać teksty...jeszcze raz dziękuje. Będę częściej tu pisała :)) pozdrowionka :)
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Hi

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Need to share sth with you...

Postprzez QMarcoPoloXTR » 6 gru 2017, o 20:33

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Re: hej.

Postprzez ejkans » 13 gru 2017, o 16:45

mozna jakies tlumaczenie ?
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