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Rozprawka Essay

Postprzez glu12 » 14 lut 2011, o 21:12

Not very often happens that some schools are single sex school, but is it true that boys and girls should be educated separately? In my opinion it is not. As I am a girl I will try to show why is it better for me to have boys in class.
Firstly the difference between boys and girls is very big, and that is way boys and girl have different hobbies, and are interesting in other things, thanks that we can learn something new and interesting from ourself.
Secondly the fact, that man and woman are from different worlds show that it is just normal, and we have to used to it and toughen up to be a tolerant person, which is really important attribute in modern world.
The last argument is that people in class help to each other, boys are strong so they can always protect girls, and girls are so sweet , so they can show boys how to be good guys.
In my opinion it would be afoul to be only with girls on class, I think it is preatty cool to have various people in team, life is more colorfull than.

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Re: Rozprawka Essay

Postprzez piotrdługaszek » 14 lut 2011, o 22:17

glu12 napisał(a):Not very often happens that some schools are single sex school, but is it true that boys and girls should be educated separately? In my opinion it is not. As I am a girl I will try to show why is it better for me to have boys in class.
Firstly the difference between boys and girls is very big, and that is way boys and girl have different hobbies, and are interesting in other things, thanks that we can learn something new and interesting from ourself.
Secondly the fact, that man and woman are from different worlds show that it is just normal, and we have to used to it and toughen up to be a tolerant person, which is really important attribute in modern world.
The last argument is that people in class help to each other, boys are strong so they can always protect girls, and girls are so sweet , so they can show boys how to be good guys.
In my opinion it would be afoul to be only with girls on class, I think it is preatty cool to have various people in team, life is more colorfull than.

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Zmieniłem trochę wstęp bo pierwsze 2 zdania trochę były nielogiczne. A jak się rozpędzięłm to wyszło więcej:)

Single sex schooling is a very controversial issue. Some people claim that single sex schools are better than coeducational schools. Proponents of the idea that boys and girls should be taught separately believe that single sex schools are more beneficial in terms of learning opportunities, (tu dopisz po przecinku kilka zalet single sex schools) . However, I think that all students, despite their sex, should go to the same school.


Paragraph 1.

Firstly the difference between boys and girls is very big, and that is way boys and girl have different hobbies, and are interesting in other things, thanks that we can learn something new and interesting from ourself.


In my opinion coeducational schools give a better chance to exchange our views and experience.(topic sentence) The difference between boys and girls is very big. They have different hobbies and interests and because of this we can learn something new from each other.

topic sentence - to zdanie mówiące co będzie przedstawaił cały paragraf. Topic sentence to podstawa każdego paragrafu. Pozostałe zdania w paragrafie powinny łączyć się logicznie z topic sentence.



Paragraph 2


Secondly the fact, that man and woman are from different worlds show that it is just normal, and we have to used to it and toughen up to be a tolerant person, which is really important attribute in modern world.

Teraz zrób jak w poprzednim paragrafie. Wprowadź topic sentence i rozwiń w kilku zdaniach. Podziel swoje zdanie na kilka części i dodaj coś jeszcze.


Paragraph 3.

The last argument is that people in class help to each other, boys are strong so they can always protect girls, and girls are so sweet , so they can show boys how to be good guys.

Napisz topic sentence (chłopcy są przydatni dziewczynom) W kolejnych zdaniach podaj kilka przykładów i powodów. Nie pisz zdań tak długich jak powyżej tym bardziej nie zawieraj w nich po kilka pomysłów na raz.


Zakończenie

To sum up, I think that coeducational schools are better than single sex schools. It would be awful to have only girls at school. I believe it is cool to have various sexes in the class. Life is more colourful then.
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Re: Rozprawka Essay

Postprzez glu12 » 15 lut 2011, o 20:37

Wielkie dzięki : )
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