transactional letter - błędy w liscie z uczelni

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transactional letter - błędy w liscie z uczelni

Postprzez basia06 » 12 mar 2012, o 06:22

Dear Mr. Peter Silwood,
I am writing to complain about the arrangements that you have made for me.

First of all, wrote in the letter that the hotel accommodation in the hotel has been arranged, although in booking form I wrote that I want family accommodation

Secondly, you made a mistake in the name of the classes. I want to attend for business studies, not for social studies, how it have been mistaken.

I am really disappoint, that my booking form have not been read more carefully. If I want to give up the course, will I get money for booking fee back?

This course is important for me , because it improves chances to getting good job, so if you change the arrangements, I will attend for it, but if you not, I will quite it. I am waiting for your quick respond.

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błędy w liscie z uczelni poprawiona wersja

Postprzez basia06 » 20 mar 2012, o 15:49

Dear Mr. Peter Silwood,
I am writing to complain about the arrangements that you made for me.

First of all, the letter stated that the hotel accommodation was arranged, however, in the booking form it was written by me that I want the family accommodation.

Secondly, you made a mistake in the name of the classes. I want to attend for business studies, not for social ones, as you thought.

I am really disappointed, that my booking form was not read carefully enough. If I want to give up the course, will I get money for booking fee back?
This course is important for me, because it improves chances to getting a good job, so if you change the conditions, I will attend for it, but if you not, I will quite. I am waiting for your quick respond.

Yours sincerely,
XYZ
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Re: transactional letter - błędy w liscie z uczelni

Postprzez marrysska » 18 lis 2013, o 18:24

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Re: transactional letter - błędy w liscie z uczelni

Postprzez Admin » 7 kwi 2016, o 09:57

to nie jest do końca poprawione :) ale i tak dobre :) a teraz błędy -
I want to attend bussiness studies, and not social studies, as you thoght I wanted.
it improves chances of getting a good job.....
I will attend it
I will quit - quit - zrezygnuję, zrezygnować :) quite to znaczy całkiem :)
tylko kilka błędów a tak to super :)
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